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rather than plot critisism, stop with the tweening, it is doing the animation no justice, there were some school boy errors there with shape tweening for colour and so forth, you made it look shoddy. check it each time you do an effect and when the character looses shape to change colour make it better again...
For this movie, I was purposely trying to have what you would likely call 'bad graphics' because I thought that maybe some people on this site have the capability to see symbolism, and art, rather than your typical flash movie which is likely to be just violence or a lengthy joke.
I just wish i had the time to play with flash properly, studying really gets in the way sometimes...
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